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Poetry for Life...


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Created By: rsliwins (13)
Date Created: 01/13/2008
Last Updated: 01/31/2008 10:25PM

Crying for Life

 

Six months of tears flowing. Pain, joy, fear and hope have all come out in the same way. While crying seems sad it is actually the start of new life. Real feelings being felt instead of buried; being acknowledged, released, and hopefully accepted. Cleansing water, rolling softly down the cheek. Powerful; unstoppable; without warning overcoming.

Vulnerability allows opportunity. Not certainty, but the only real chance of moving to where life goes. New beginnings, renewed love and laughter are watered to grow. Letting go and flowing together. Crying for life. Loving life. Living life.

RS 4/07

 

 

 

 

 

My Dad

 

One year ago you joined Mom again, for life everlasting.  We have missed you greatly and we have carried on together.  Many first times without you were sad, yet you still bring a smile to our hearts every time we think of you.  Your voice is still heard often, especially when we need your wisdom.  Your laugh and smile are still in each of us, helping us handle life’s confusion, pain and mystery.  Your warmth still soothes us; your strength keeps us feeling secure; and your positive spirit helps us soar.

 

For me, our friendship continues on with feelings deep in my heart.  I do wish I could talk to you face to face, or by phone as we often did.  I do wish I could hug you and be hugged by you again.  Well, some day my Dad.  For now, we party on……

 

Love,

           RS 1/30/08

 

 

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Comments

Anonymous Posting Anonymous User
01/13/2008 10:26PM
beautiful words... thx
largemarge
01/14/2008 12:04AM
Wow, that is deep stuff. I keep thinking about how vulnerability allows opportunity... that is true. Great poem and title!
Houshmandzadeh84
01/19/2008 07:12PM
Thanks for sharing the poem Uncle Ron. Great words. Very deep and inspirational.
Anonymous Posting Anonymous User
01/26/2008 01:19AM
I like your poem, but it seems a little sad. I hope you are ok. It sounds like you are letting your feelings out & I'm sure that is making you feel rejuvenated. Anyway, you are a talented writer so I hope you keep writing and continue to feel better!
Anonymous Posting Anonymous User
01/27/2008 12:12AM
Hi, I appreciate all of the comments. I wrote this poem in April of 2007. I am very happy with my life. I wrote this poem at a very intense time and I was struck by the many feelings that can relate to crying.... so I posted it. I have more stuff and will try to post it! RS

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